雅思写作错误例题

主谓不一致

错误句子：When one have money, he can do what he want to.

错误分析：one是单数第三人称，因此have应改为has；want应改为wants。

改正：When one has money, he can do what he wants （to do）.

修饰语错位

错误句子：I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.

错误分析：better位置不当，应置于句末。

改正：I believe I can do it well and I will know the world outside the campus better.

句子不完整

错误句子：There are many ways to know the society. For example by.

错误分析：句子结构不完整，缺少了连接词。

改正：There are many ways to know the society. For example, by.

双谓语与时态错误